My Own Little World

• Artist: Project Love
• Description:
• Date: 04/26/2009
• Tags: little world

My anger. it swells inside me. building til i lose control. i yell. i hit. anything to soothe my uncontrolable rage. i kick. i scream. it doesnt help. i curse. i cry. i stop. i think. i count to ten. i take a break. and i escape into my own little world. where im the boss. nothings wrong. its happy and peaceful. no wars. no violance. no sickness. no dieing. then i come back. back to reality. to a world of war. back to the hate. i know it so well. back to the pain. the crying. and more. back to the yelling that burns in my ears. i look around. i give a small smile. i give a little laugh. and then i go back. my own little world.

Comments

[KitanaWolfblood]

There is a great raw engery here, however, it overwhelming. There is no clear direction in the writting and sounds a bit childish. Don't spell it all out. Make it so people want to read and understand more. Take time and devlope your lines, your word choice. Spin the web and before long you will see your writting improve. I related that feeling to a swelling sea breaking against the rocks and than sinking back into the lower depths.