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Your tears run like rain in the darkness,
In the cold, dark and dreary darkness.
Laughter rings outside the door,
As my bare feet slap against the cold tile floor.
My small sliver of light banishes your darkness,
And the spirit smiles, forever ageless.
C’é un fantasma tra noi.
I didn’t understand why you needed to hold my hand.
Now I know that I was the link to the spirit land.
I absorb the negativity through my body and my soul,
In a futile attempt to make you whole
I longed to slice him with a brand,
Forged by legendary Vulcan’s hand.
Un Fantasma é piange a noi.
I ignored you. I couldn’t face it anymore.
I was surrounded by emotional gore.
So I jumped into the pit to escape the pendulum.
I threw myself into the ancient and musty smell,
In order to rot with forgotten knowledge,
With the hope that I will be acknowledged.
L’intelligente é niente.
My intelligence is all I have left to give.
My intelligence is all that lets me live.
I will conquer your darkness
And the spirit that is ageless
I want to see you smile more
When there is a ghost between us forevermore.
- Title: Un Fantasma Tra Noi
- Artist: Ink_River
- Description: A ghostly poem based on a song.
- Date: 04/30/2009
- Tags: fantasmalacunacoilpoetryghostspoe
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Rainbow cat FACE - 05/03/2009
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the pit and the pendulum!
it also reminds me of the leaving song part 2 by afi. your poem and the song have a lot of similarities. using random sentences in a different language between the stanzas, and it kind of reminds me of reincarnation, although i dont think it has anything to do with that.
this is great. 5/5 - Report As Spam
- KAKASHI NO 7 - 05/01/2009
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fking awsome, if you made this up i would give you 10000000000$ 5/5.
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