You...

• Artist: Gazma
• Description: As you will find for most if not all of my work, I free hand a lot of it. I get an idea and let my pen do the rest. That is the case of this poem. I got the idea for it...and then I decided to write it using a slightly different format from my other stuff.
• Date: 05/27/2009
• Tags: wrong anime poem life drama

You...
Yes, you...whom I called friend.
It was you...
Yes, it was you...who delivered the first blow.
I thought...
Yes, I thought...that you were different.
Wrong...
Yes, I was wrong...to think that you would be.
Now...?
Now, I don't know...if I can trust again.
I will, though...
Yes, I will trust again...
No...
Not because I am naive...
But because I know nothing else...
I am...
Yes, I am...a beaten dog that returns after every beating...

Comments

[iR 0 0 t B e e r]

i gotta agree.. the naive point and beyond that was excellent.
Yes, the beginning had meaning
but it was just so god damn brutal to read,
that i had to push myself to want to read this.
If it wasnt for my curiousity, i would of passed it up after the first line.

so i have to agree with the 2 people who posted before me,
its wasnt bad, because of the last part being so genius, but the beginning wasnt good.

[x-Agent-Angel-x]

the last line is the best part :]

[rui_lyssa]

mmm...not bad..but not a good poem tho..