Freedom Stand

• Artist: 4ever_lost in_ ur eyes
• Description: Well what can I say? This poem talks about segregation and freedom around the time Dr.King made his stand on the issue. This isnt really that good but im still working on it, and sorry if there are some grammical errors but please rate and comment. All comments are welcome! If you have something to say, well then say it...thank you!
• Date: 06/15/2009
• Tags: freedom stand

Come on child, take my hand
Today we will march and take a stand
Today we will follow Dr.King and praise the lord
Hallilua we will sing!
We will stand together as a whole,
and fight for our rights that was despreatly won.
We will unite and praise the lord!
We shall fight for what is right!
We will sing for our ancestor's light
So come on baby, take my hand
today we will march and take a stand
and make the world a freedom land!

-peoplesgirl05

Comments

[verylostX_x]

nice love tahts

[4ever_lost in_ ur eyes]

thank you!

[Dragons Willow]

this is great!!! i luv the rythme and the end that repeats the beginning a bit....my fave is the last line about making the world into a freedom land....that was brilliant!
critique: Lord, Hallelujah....line 6 u have was...should be were.

that's all!!! keeping working on it! 5/5 4laugh