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Tears falling down
no one understands
i look alright on the
outside,
but im not on the
inside.
my crazed step-mom
yelling at me,telling me what to
do,and im not listening,
she is not my boss.
My dad yelling at me
cuz my brothers did
something i didnt do
im running to my room
crying.
He just doesnt understand.
i hurt on the inside.
Trying to cope with what is
happening.
*my mother is leaving me
i will miss her very dearly
but everyone just doesnt
understand!!!!!
Im trying my best to not cry
but the tears still roll
down my cheek like
little racecars
if only everyone knew what i was
feeling inside,
maybe just maybe all the
yelling will stop.
Tears falling downno one understands
i look alright on the
outside,
but im not on the
inside.
- by jezebel_redfern |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/28/2009 |
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- Title: Tears falling down
- Artist: jezebel_redfern
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Description:
This is a poem i wrote becuase i feel like im unwanted sometimes
*=my mom isnt dying,she is going out to sea,she is in the navy - Date: 06/28/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- jezebel_redfern - 06/29/2009
- thnx fer the advice
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- MumblingNapoleon - 06/28/2009
- listen, hun. I get that you're teen angsting all over the place, but perhaps poetry written about the subject could be a little more...poetic? I feel like Holden Caulfield could have written this in his sleep. He probably did. And when you mention tears falling down your face like racecars, the only poetic imagery my mind can get out of that is of some kid literally crying racecars, which is a pretty awesome image, I'm not going to lie, but probably not the one you were going for.
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