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I sit in the cold
I watch in pain
The silver droplets that fall
And call themselves rain
I stand in the corner
I'm silent, I'm alone
Everyone is watching
I want to go home
My eyes leak sadness
My heart feels sorrow
When will that day come
The one called tomarrow
They stand in there lines
They stand dressed in black
The soilders, they beat us
They took all that we had
Some go into rooms
They never come out
Most hopes for living
Are shrowded by doubt
They took my family
And I've come to learn
What they ment when they said
It would soon be my turn
I stare into darkness
I cover my ears
The lies and the screams
I don't want to hear
The iron door opens
The air is so stale
The sun burns our skin
That's grown to be pale
They lead us in groups
They lead us through halls
The soilders so big
Make us feel so small
We pass by the others
They're faces so cold
They tell us in silence
"Your lives have been sold"
We near the big rooms
Our fates are all set
It's sad when they say
"You deserve what you get"
I am standing in a line
I am all dressed in black
We're about to go in
And we're not coming back
- by kairiuchiha24 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/02/2009 |
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- Title: Not Coming Back
- Artist: kairiuchiha24
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Description:
neh, another poem, hope you guys like it
good song to go with it is this one
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ebiSYwFbtvk - Date: 07/02/2009
- Tags: coming back
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Comments (3 Comments)
- kairiuchiha24 - 07/05/2009
- "bows" thank you very much
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- Deathwish Valentine - 07/05/2009
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brilliant. i can really visualize the scene you're setting. a few errors in language, but nothing big...
very dramatic. i like it. 5/5! - Report As Spam
- sharcasmkills - 07/02/2009
- oh wow. DRAMATIC and it really mixes with your "holocaust" theme^^
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