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Running in a circle,
Almost out of ground
Digging deeper ditches,
And falling farther down
Past hatchets long since buried,
And memories left to rot
Were what was once important
All amounts to naught
Blinding sky of the forgotten
Consuming all my light
Futile thoughts, unwanted
Keep me awake all night
And when every work is spoken,
When all is said and done
I realize one most simple fact
False hope’s better than none
- Title: Running in a Circle
- Artist: Yan Qi
- Description: I really don't like the 9th line... But I enjoyed writing it. It's message is one of optimism though it seems kind of depressing.
- Date: 07/14/2009
- Tags: running circle
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Yan Qi - 07/25/2009
- This poem got low ratings. I was really proud of, if you don't like it at least tell me why.
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- Suicidal-RagDoll - 07/18/2009
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awsome awsome poem
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