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DAMN IT JAKE…
by uc poika
in the little woods that killed the highway noise
and hid his favorite bar from the peering eyes
of unintended guests and even the cops
where in seclusion many forbidden lovers kissed
and many inebriated souls made the choice
to purge themselves though management who advised
they first learn to control themselves and stop
was also often more disgusted than pissed
and soon distracted turned their eyes away
just like they did for Jake my distraught friend
whose madness stole his money and took his pay
and now threatened to leave him locked up in the pen
he stepped inside the woods as if to pee...
he put the gun to his head… the rest is history…
- Title: DAMN IT JAKE...
- Artist: UC Poika
- Description: Nonfiction piece about my friend Jake's last moments
- Date: 07/15/2009
- Tags: jake suicide
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Suicidal-RagDoll - 07/18/2009
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wow thats pretty deep
i like it but it is sad - Report As Spam
- Floating Stars - 07/17/2009
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i agree "damn it"
so sad T-T - Report As Spam
- Black_Shinn_Hisakawa - 07/16/2009
- Ow, sad, though.
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- UC Poika - 07/16/2009
- Yes it is true, sad but true! Thanks for your comment.
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- critic-the-homeless - 07/16/2009
- the last part of the poem was sad. is it true?
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