my sweet, sweet love

• Artist: XXXPoisonLoverXXX
• Description: i write what i feel ( i would like to note that this poem is a rufdrafed, it isnt the final. i just wonted to see what ppl think of it)
• Date: 07/16/2009
• Tags: sweet sweet love

My soul once alight with happyness
Now black with dispar
My hear once beating strong
Now broken and bleak
My eyes once so deep
Now shallow pools of resentment
For love is gone
I will never love agine
Without you
My sweet, sweet love

Comments

[AmyTheMuse]

Needs some editing.
the idea's great though...