A Break

• Artist: MikeyMike90
• Description: I made this one up as I was typing. Good? No, horrible. But it's kind of a rant, and took me a total of 15 minutes to write. No edits, just straight through typing. Actually, edited one time total. Because I put the poem in the desc, and the desc in the poem. Woohoo! :sweat:
• Date: 07/19/2009
• Tags: break

I work all day,
I come home.
I work at home,
I go to sleep.
Even in my dreams I work.

I work, and work, and work.
I get ridiculed for my work,
I always expect it.

What is my job?
I'm not sure,
I wish I could take a journey to the shore.

I have no time,
Not now at least,
This world is empty,
As is it's belief.

I cannot stand some people's arrogance.
Just one more thing,
When will I get a break?

Comments

[Arc En Licorne]

i like it. it sounds like some one is controling u & u cant do any thing bout it. it sounds like life

[majesticangel07]

Mindless rants are awesome. I liked this... strangely... lol

[HTOB]

have more mystery in your writing have a hidden underlay to the words on the page