Dark love

• Artist: Zompirelf
• Description: I came up with this as I was writing so if its bad I really don't care.^-^
  It is a poem.
• Date: 07/22/2009
• Tags: dark love

Love

Something light, yeah, right
Something good,well, it could
Love is dark, it creates no spark
A euphoric mess, a little more a little less

Happiness is false, a stupid valse
It's more of a curse, there is nothing worse
Nothing better, but your face gets wetter
It's a crying shame, it's all the same

What you are going through is nothing new
In fact, some might say it's just an act
Love created these scars, it's so bizare
I still have these feelings, but the scars keep healing.

Comments

[Lion-King-Loke]

Something you should watch about is your grammar. You want to make sure you have commas when you're separating thoughts. Other than that, it's quite good. You're quite good at half rhymes, I must say.

[Arc En Licorne]

i think that really explains love & how it makes people feel whether u have always had good luck w/ love or bad luck w/ love

[Discuit]

I love this <333
5/5