Hopeless (traitor)

• Artist: AnInactiveSoul
• Description: This poem is about a guy who betrayed his friend and killed him.
  
  (I'm making two sides to this: victim and traitor. They're describing the past of a character in a story I'm writing)
• Date: 08/12/2009
• Tags: hopeless traitor betray victim

Envious of his talented friend,
Tons of hatred dwells within.
Though smiles are always on his face
Anger exists in another place.

In their late teens now,
The two who were once kids.
Tired of being over-shadowed,
Eternal punishment is what he bid.

He built a lie to lure out his friend,
To what would be his definite end.
Very deep into the mountains,
He'd carry out his plan.
And he killed him on a path
That no one dares to tread.

Comments

[AnInactiveSoul]

thanks

[Metal death angel]

I like it.