The Flow of Blood

• Artist: ilsala
• Description: My mind often wanders while i'm in school and so i usually end up with thoughts like these...
• Date: 11/19/2009
• Tags: pierce

Attack my heart with your words
Words that cut like a scalpel
Pierce my skin and slice it open
Let my blood pour out across this land
Let it cover all around
Let none escape

Sew me back together now
Erase the scar
Leave no marks of the pain endured
Wash away the blood that flowed so free
Let every thing be free of its grasp
Let none remember but you and me

Comments

[Tobi-s Fangirl13]

P.S.: The imagery is superb as well, and the structure. :3

[Tobi-s Fangirl13]

What's it about? It seems there's pain involved and someone covering up the evidence, but there's no discernable idea behind it. Then again, with the best poetry, there usually isn't. :3 5/5