Thoughts of the Confused

• Artist: Spicesayy
• Description: 2 girls like me...my ex and a new girl..idk who too chooze...still have feeling for my ex...but i rlly like this other girl too.....so confuzed..and worte this :) ...comment/rate pleese :)
• Date: 01/20/2010
• Tags: thoughts confuzed

I thought I'd write.
I thought I'd say.
That I'm screwed
in every way.

I think there's
two choices to see.
Let's go over them
shall we?

One.
In love but lost.
But I'd have it back
at any cost.
My true feeling lay
within one's wait.
If time ever came I wish,
Because time is too late.

Two.
A new start.
Yet still no where
near my heart.
Tried time again.
In class we play.
But in the end
I always push away.

My choices haunt me.
Thoughts creep in my sleep.
Two is better than one.
One is more sweet.

I had another chance with two.
I need a chance with one.
So this my friend,
is where my problems begun.

I don’t know what to do.
I've never known what to say.
I shouldn't think to myself like this,
because thinking screws me in every way.

Comments

[Spicesayy]

her dad made us split up......neither mine nor her fault....

[xHxExLxExNx]

makes my cry and with the girl did she dump u or vice virsa

[Aurealis Sky]

Wonderful!
There was only one hiccup though- you need to put 'is where my problems have begun.' Either that, or you could put problem's begun.
Anyways, wonderful poem! I wish you the best of luck, and hope you figure out which one is for you~

[kessia_baby]

the first stanza or whatever you wanna cal it was funny and i like the over-all poem too