idk

• Artist: tabitha_love_1
• Description: this is what you get when you have a bottle of vodca and a laptop
• Date: 03/20/2010
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you cant let the world get you down you must get up and try again and this time be stronger at what you do you must walk fearlessly in the open and show the people that hurt you that you r strong and you can get on with to life you have you dont need someone to do for you becaust you could do it on your own

Comments

[Echo Ligeia]

The addition of form would improve this poem (really, any at all). I won't go into specifics because, as I gather from your description, it was not a serious attempt. It's too bad that such inspirational subject matter was squandered. Better luck next time.