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In the silence...
In the dark...
I can hear it...
from afar...
A demon's love song
is heard everywhere.
It's spreading sadness
and feelings of despair.
It's melody is like a waterfall
were every drop contains a dream
but in the end, you realize,
it's just another nightmare stream.
There's a demon...
that fell in love...
forever wrong...
with the above...
A demon's love song in my ear.
It plays it's harp so I can hear
from my window, all those years
that he spent on acid tears.
In the nothingness
the demon cries
playing his song
into the night
Expecting an answer
from the one he loves.
No longer alive.
Now above.
His wings are gone
and so is he...
playing that love song
for his beloved to see
He always loved her
with all his heart
now gone
torn apart
A demon's love song in my ear.
It plays it's harp so I can hear
from my window all those years
that he spent on acid tears.
- by Fantastic Nightmares |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/21/2010 |
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- Title: A demon's love song
- Artist: Fantastic Nightmares
- Description: This is probably the best poem I've written. It's my favorite one.
- Date: 03/21/2010
- Tags: demons love song
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Rkah - 03/24/2010
- Eh I only liked like half of it, but I'm kinda harsh. Its not bad. 3/5
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- danger_addict - 03/24/2010
- nice
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- Fantastic Nightmares - 03/21/2010
- Yes, it may sound better with "is heard" -I already thought of that- but then the verse would just be too short for the tempo and thus would have a horrid rhythm as to how you're supposed to read it -or the emphasis, for that matter-.
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- inking the world - 03/21/2010
- wow it is REALLY good!!!! 5/5
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- sora wonk - 03/21/2010
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can a demon love?
btw: "is heard in the air"
it would sound better w/o "is heard" but thats just my opinion
nice poem :] - Report As Spam