notice this

• Artist: LostInThisDance
• Description: haha alright this poem was made in my english class. this person told me to help her on her poem so i did and i came up with this poem in the last moment. haha she seem to love the poem cuz well she said that it was so true so ya i turn out to like it as well. im sure this poem has many meaning. so rate and comment!! wat do u think??!?
• Date: 03/22/2010
• Tags: notice

Hear them bang at your door
As you open your core

You blurt out your feelings
And you felt like braking

Thats when they chatter your darkness
And you show them your kindness

A few days, and few nights
Your all in frights

You hear them hiss at you
Just to make you feel blue

You feel a thump
As your heart just got dumped

Comments

[doLLcore143]

i love it..
i like it..

[LostInThisDance]

ya sure just say who wrote it =^-^=

[cyd_charisse2]

beutiful may i copy it?
bucuz i love it