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A familiar face.
Love catches on.
An unfamiliar place.
Time is only dawn.
Minds start to race.
A trace of a ribbon.
It's the start of a chase.
Hearts get a taste of freedom.
She beings to embrace.
He gains wisdom.
They pick up the pace.
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Love takes its place,
As the base.
As they have there first taste,
Of true love
- by XxNinjaDinosawrxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/02/2010 |
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- Title: Finding True Love
- Artist: XxNinjaDinosawrxX
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Description:
About a girl that meets a guy that reminds her of her father who is in the Military fighting for the country she loves. She ends up falling in love with him.
If you have any questions, please ask.
I’m not really sure if it's any good, so that’s kind of why I posted it, to see if I have any talent (what so ever). Please, go a little easy on me, this is my first arena post (ever) I can take some harshness, that's the only way I can get better. Thank you (: - Date: 04/02/2010
- Tags: finding true love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- sasukeluvr7 - 06/19/2010
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yeah so do i and purplefire1414 lol smile
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- sk8terpunk718 - 04/08/2010
- this is great. i would have thought that you have posted many times before this. very good. 5/5 please write more. i'm sorry, i don't have any advice.
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- IShadowChiefI - 04/02/2010
- For a first post, I thought that it was pretty good. One suggestion I'd make is to try and make it "flow" more smoothly as you're reading it, if you know what I mean. I look forward to you're future posts, if you plan on any.
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