Satan's Son

• Artist: water_byakugan7
• Description: This a poem I wrote half of for a english assignment the day after my mom died. We only had 3 days left till winter break. Then I went back and added the second part after "A keepsake for Satan's Son." when I was trying to enter it into a school poem contest but thought the first part alone would have been too dark. I like the original but there are those poeple who would assume I'm emo based on my writing. (I'm not!)
• Date: 07/23/2010
• Tags: satan

So much on my mind,
Filled but undefined.

Still cannot see why I have to do this,
Might as well meet Death's kiss.

Everything is life is so unreal,
He begs me to seal the deal.

All is done, no turning back,
'Cause by now I'm in Satan's debt.

For all the deeds I have begun,
The seven sins surround but one.

To hope I'm not the bride to be,
A keepsake for Satan's Son.

So in a way, to those who've heard,
I must obey his every word.

"But why? But why?" they ask,
"Break those chains and that mask!"

"I can't! I won't!" I say with a bow,
then a whisper, "I don't know how."

My wish, my hope, was then transferred,
Up the Earth and through the birds.

Before my bright, white angel, it lies,
So down she came in a demon's disguise.

She took my hand and broke the ring,
Much to Satan's Son's surprise.

I looked at her and only then,
Did I see that she would be,

My light,
My mom,
My friend.

Comments

[water_byakugan7]

thx i appreciate that fact that you unde4rstand why i wrote it and thx for the comment, if you got poems or entries ill comment on yours if you like. thx for the 4

[Echo_Shora]

Hmmm I'm conflicted on this one. It is very demonic, and yet has a nice finish, and you have reason for writing it too, no Im not gona say your emo, but your mom died and this gives you a way to cope. I'll give it a 4
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