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Justice
Someone define this word.
Please anybody explain.
I wish to know.
I want to learn.
So many times.
Innocent or guilty.
right or wrong.
alive or dead.
It's all the same.
The shame.
The game.
The depression inside.
I wish for retribution.
I seek some sort of revenge.
The declaration of war.
A war that we must wage.
I suppose a theory.
A unity of one.
Speak out with violence.
Voices seem weak.
If i am judge.
So i be judged.
If i am considered damned
So I am damned.
If you're tired of "Justice"
Then stand with me today
A new breed of order
A new home for bruised and broken.
- by ChroniclesOfGrim |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/05/2010 |
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- Title: Justice
- Artist: ChroniclesOfGrim
- Description: I can't describe, just felt like writting this one.
- Date: 12/05/2010
- Tags: justice
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- brittany bloom - 12/14/2010
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Punctuation~
In your 4th stanza is sought supposed to be sort?
In your last stanza your should be you're
In the last stanza you used than instead of then
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o-o. I like this poem. The words strike home and incite feelings that are actually meaningful. I proudly give this a 5/5!
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