Heartbreak and Bloodshed

• Artist: Kodokuna_Shinigami
• Description: This is just a poem I wrote in memory of some of my broken hearts, and in dedication to those who have also been broken. Not just this, but too attack those who unjustly broke someone's heart, just because they didn't feel like putting effort into making a relationship work.
• Date: 07/23/2011
• Tags: heartbreak heart break pain sadness

The heart beats and yearns for a love,
And when it finds it the heart is free as a dove.
But when all hope is lost,
And the heart is at cost,
Comes the story of heartbreak and pain.
For we have left lain,
The fetus of a passion,
In a disorderly fashion,
For one can not handle the work.
So instead of putting forth effort they fill the other with hurt.
As to not be a part in this twisted little skit.
Of agony and misery towards the lit,
Flame of love which has now been exstinguished
Leaving behind the ashes of love relinquished.

Comments

[X-PaNdOrAs_DeAd-X]

beautiful writeing very close to wat to u have seen and delt with in life very touching

[Mae-Chai]

So very deep and beautiful~ <3 You really did do a good job with writing it!

[Alice956]

i love it its awesome biggrin

[yay_its_molly]

Wow this is absolutely beautiful. I love how nicely the rhyming flows throughout.