My teacher said it was really good, but i want to know what the people think.
The wind is a beautiful thing,
Its hair as silky as a mermaid’s.
It’s song like a Royal Orchid Sprite,
Or sometimes a wolf, howling at the moon.
Pushing me along,
As I walk down the street.
Telling me to hurry,
“Pick up your feet!”
Insects and birds crawl along
Its thin spine,
As they travel
To and fro.
It dances playfully,
In the humid air,
Blows snow around,
And the autumn leaves.
It helps cover the earth with heat.
Blowing on it
So gently.
Or sometimes so fiercely.
It fills hearts with joy,
Young and old,
As they watch you throw leaves,
In the air.
It chills many legs,
And arms,
And ears,
But it warms many hearts.
And it never stays in one place for long.
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