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The Shadow He Cast
The Shadow He Cast

He walked in my life so loving, made me feel loved, warm, and new.
From just making it day by day,
I began to live those day,
Feel alive and free.
Now there's nothing left of what we had,
Nothing but a shadow, Nothing but a ghost.

Nothing but emptiness, Nothing but a cold, dead feel.
I feel so empty inside.
Since our last goodbye,
I picture you in my mind,
What happened to us?
How could we let it end the way it did?
Why is this happening?
I need you back again.

But there's nothing left.
Nothing but a shadow, Nothing but a ghost.
Hurt, Regret.
Pain and Sorrow.
Anger and tears.

This is the shadow he casts






User Comments: [2]
Foxless
Community Member





Tue Dec 15, 2009 @ 11:52pm


wow so deep


Peasley
Community Member





Fri Jan 01, 2010 @ 07:34pm


I loved the poem! However, I think that you could do a little editing to make it easier on the tongue; to, eh, fix the meter. It's really deep, Whisp! Keep writing! :]


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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