Fiouf! and 7 hours later... it's up! Man, I did the top pannels so fast by comparison to the last! I mean, it's understandable since I needed to fit 5 people onto the bottom but wow... 4 hours just for that? I was having all kinds of complications with the poses and how they couldn't overlap eachother or else look wierd. confused I think it came out pretty good though. ^_^ As for who said what on the top pannels it really doesn't matter but I suggest you go by the order at the bottom. ^_^
I think Josh looks adorable with that stare face! xd I was actually rather proud of it. lol. The expression came out perfectly. And for my winners, don't worry guys, you'll all get better shots with more detailed expressions. It's just that for you, with all the work I had to put in for the last pannel, it was better for me to simplify the faces. smile You might have noticed a few things that are different too, like how I had chaged Demon Murasaki (first on the left) and Snow Tiger's (second to last on the right) hair a tad. Since you both had the same Gaia hair cuts I figured it would just be better to vary them a bit.
I hope you guys like it! And don't forget to tell your friends that you're offically in a manga! Next Page:the 21st of June
I'll see you guys around next week! biggrin ~*Bella*~
As an extra little something I just though that I'd give some of you a peek at the structure of BOWBS art shop. ^_^ As I was drawing the halls and rooms of the store I realized that I had no bloody clue where I was going! O_o So, I designed a BASIC plan of the ground level... meaning it's more a doddle then anything else. Here it is. ^_^ And YES, it's a big place. lol
snowtiger6776 · Community Member · Wed Jun 14, 2006 @ 11:22pm
Oh WOW~ eek You put a hell of alot of detail into the last pannel. And yeah, Josh's expression is great! lol. No wonder you had no time to go bowling with me and Ellie on Tuesday. You had your work cut out for you. lol
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Josh_JB_Benton · Community Member · Thu Jun 15, 2006 @ 05:39am
OMG!! This is so funny! 3nodding Your drawings are really really good. xd Keep up the good work! xp
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ZestyHag · Community Member · Thu Jun 15, 2006 @ 06:46am
rofl Bunch of stalkers. Great job Bell. ^^
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AnaChi · Community Member · Thu Jun 15, 2006 @ 07:30am
haha, that was great Bella, I love the last panel also, the detail is wonderful and I just love Josh's expression.
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Julina Lynch · Community Member · Thu Jun 15, 2006 @ 12:33pm
It shouldn't be too surprising that he seems to have fans. It is, however, very funny!
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Nicco Nightstar · Community Member · Thu Jun 15, 2006 @ 01:45pm
hahaha... yesh! behold my masterfully detailed impression of a n00b!!!! ^^ j/k
SQUEE!!! i totally love how you drew crispy!!!! 4laugh i like me too... but CRISPY!!! GAAH!!!! heartheart
he actually said MEOW!!! KAWAII!!!! and i've said the most so far!!! "quiet he'll hear you!" and "no thanks to you!" hahaha... ^^
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MrNailVT · Community Member · Thu Jun 15, 2006 @ 02:32pm
XD thats awsome bella XD i cant wait to read the next page
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Librra · Community Member · Thu Jun 15, 2006 @ 03:09pm
..... eek ...... ohmygawsh ........ xd It's beautiful!!! It's like uber cool. I'm in shock. Woah. Everyone's characters are so nice looking, and Josh has the coolest expression. heart
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snowtiger6776 · Community Member · Thu Jun 15, 2006 @ 11:47pm
Those expressions are priceless Bella! <Bounces a bit> Can't wait to see the next page. biggrin You tagged my avi perfectly.
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RecklessImagine · Community Member · Fri Jun 16, 2006 @ 01:59am
JOSH FAN SERVICE!
-SQUEE!- whee
Josh's expression kills me. xd
Wow. The detail on the bush is amazing. It really looks like front and back. 3nodding That's great.
I love the fanservice expressions. whee Are they all girls? It's hard to tell. There are three that look like they might be guys, but it could just be position and clothing.
Bad Josh. No skippy de work. JB will kill you! D:
Mm.. I think you should have used a different type of bubble for the whispering. With the normal word bubbles, it looks like they're talkng at a normal level, but if Josh can't hear them, that can't be true, right? Dotted line bubbles are good for whispers, and so are smaller bubbles with smaller font.
That's all I can think of.3noddingheart
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Sagando Mirasta · Community Member · Fri Jun 16, 2006 @ 03:43pm
heartheart4laugh omg!!thats so cute!!I love it!!*gives her cookies*
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Yuna de la lune · Community Member · Fri Jun 16, 2006 @ 10:00pm
i freaking have the coolest expression eva!!! ^^
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MrNailVT · Community Member · Sun Jun 18, 2006 @ 09:37pm
Hey guys! Don't forget to tell your friends about you being in a manga! The more peeps that comment, the more motivated I am to draw! biggrin Plus, I mean, your names will pop up in the manga. You won't be left a nameless random random avatar. ^_^
Oh, and Sagando, yeah 3 of them ARE guys. lol. ^_^ (Josh appeals to all!) wink and they're not whispering. Josh is just far away so he can't hear them. I mean, I have scream bubbles up plus, he's in the middle of his thoughts so he didn't hear them. That's kinda why they're so freaked out. lol
blaugh wow! awesome job with drawing everybody!! i can't wait to see how this turns out...heheh...
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Grape Sodapop · Community Member · Mon Jun 19, 2006 @ 01:16am
Im back from New hampshire and I come back to a new page... woo !! heart And what a good page to come back to 3nodding its really funny whee , well Ill be on the prowl for more pages... *runs off into the distance*
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Thdark · Community Member · Mon Jun 19, 2006 @ 07:20am
holy crappy pops he is beeying follwed!! AWESOME!! cool work duh as always really like the peeps in the last rectangle thingy they look awesome
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Akuma_ Higurashi · Community Member · Tue Jun 20, 2006 @ 06:50pm
The characterization on this page is superb! Even if there wasn't any text, the expressions speak volumes! You do so well on folds, quite fond of this trait you have! I like how you illustrated the hustle and bustle and still managed to have neat and defined frames.