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Body No. 12
I look into your beautiful eyes
golden brown shining
as the noon day sun
brush back the strands of hair
drenched with sweat streaks
of crimson
There was life in you once im sure of it
but your luscious lips speak no more
hands so damned cold as
i probe your wounds
take notes
god why do you people die
so early
so young
I finish my work
zip up your bag
i wish i could have done more
for you
im so sorry
Notes: The victim from “The Emerald Nightclub” died from head-induced trauma, most likely from a blunt object (pool stick?). Jane Doe seems to have also been under the influence of mind-altering drugs (ecstasy?) at the time of death. TOD has been established as 2:05 AM 1/18/07.
Autopsy conducted by Dr. Keith Markman, Forensics Dep’t.
- by Quiet Dojo |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: Body No. 12
- Artist: Quiet Dojo
- Description: This was something I did during last summer's vacation...It probably came to be because I watched waaay too many CSI reruns...
- Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: body number twelve
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Comments (2 Comments)
- sweet_oblivion - 07/15/2008
- I like this. It's a lot different what I've seen here so far and it's a welcome change. The notes on the end are a nice touch.
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- Mistress Of Inferno - 07/15/2008
- Wow. o_o Interesting. Kind of sad, but I like the way it went. 4/5 ^^
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