Love

• Artist: Ichigenkai
• Description: poem i wrote when me and my girl friend first broke up
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: love poem heart break

Love...*sigh*......what is it...
The only thing that makes some of us happy....
Or could it be what we call pure happiness and joy.....
Who knows....
All I know is that I have it....
And that i am clinging on to it for dear life afraid to lose it...
i might lose it...and soon.....
And I will never be the same....
....so for those of you out there who read this...here is my advice...
Tell them everyday that you love them.....
And give them everything that you are....
Don't ever keep secrets from them and never lie....
And when your with them act like it is the last day you will ever see them...
Cuz who knows...it just might.....
I may still be young...but...if I know nothing else...I know this...
Love is there.....you may have to look for it...but when you find it....
Do everything you can make it be true....and....don't....let....go......

Comments

[Obstruction]

smile

[Ichigenkai]

i am over it for the most part...but ur right...u dont come out the same and unscathed...the scar is visible and it burns...but im still alive so....yeah

[Ichigenkai]

poetry doesnt have to rhyme...free verse...and its more of like an expression of ones self in a less poetic way

[otakuskater]

Good advice, but it doesn't fit in the poetry category but in another sort of monologue in the story you should have written. On the other hand, I know how you are feeling now. I've been there. If you have friends in school, just hang-out with them like you usually do. You may not come back to where you used to be, but it like entering into another chapter of your life. Good luck!

[Miss Liza]

The distinctions of what makes a poem a poem are unclear... but i think you crossed it. It's not poetic. Sorry.