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Brother where out thou?
Through the trenches and muddy pits we go
Medics run through the woods to and fro
Next to me lies my comrade with bloody thighs
His legs are both missing and I try to comfort him as I look into his eyes
I haven't known him long
If only I could be so strong
When the times come for me to pass
Just like it has for this poor lad
A medic comes and drags the soldier away
I wish that for this life, he will stay
But the chances of him surviving are very slim
My minds brought back when bullets light up the woods that are so dim
My adrenaline is pumps through my body
How did we get ourselves into such a folly?
Shooting blindly, I hope the bullet hits something
Killing off one more threat instead of nothing
"Charge!" I hear my lieutenant shout
Now we all charge without a doubt
Bullets and mortars surround me
For a brief moment I want nothing more to flee
Comrades around me drop to their knees
As bullets strike them from behind the trees
My breathing is labored and I charge ahead
Preparing to pump the enemy full of lead
Over the grassy knoll I go
There was one thing I didn't take into account though
I look into the eyes of the man standing in front of me
My bayonet stuck in his gut so he can't even make a plea
He gurgles and chokes as fear creeps in
All the while shock in me is coming in
With a violent shake he come free
And his limb body falls against a tree
The deafening sounds now return
I turn around to see trees burn
Bullets and mortars are all around
I drop to my knees and crawl on the ground
Back into reality, for this battle is far from ending
- by Volturian Masquerade |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/14/2008 |
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- Title: War and Conflict
- Artist: Volturian Masquerade
- Description: Is about the Battle of the Bulge during WWII, I was moved to write it after watching the battle scene in Band of Brothers.
- Date: 09/14/2008
- Tags: conflict
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Military_Balance - 01/27/2009
- Love the poem, I'm going to copy and paste this into my AIM profile. Cute and poetic, you’re an exceptional girl.
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- lostathome - 01/15/2009
- It was good, but I agree wit L33, although I think he meant rhyme for meaning. Rhyme is not the importance of the poem always, the meaning is. Most of the time people follow a pattern, mostly the ABAB pattern or sometimes ABABC for length and rhyme. Overall I thought it was well written. 4/5 (Meant 5/5 but accidents happen)
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- II j u n i a r t II - 01/13/2009
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its really good...but sometimes sacrifice meaning for rhyme
like..."Just like it has for this poor lass" ... don't you mean lad?
but anyways....yeah i love it
cuz my love is gonna be gone for such a scene as this too - Report As Spam
- spots of tea - 09/14/2008
- this is really amazing. no, seriously. it is.
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