Rose

• Artist: NEP2NE
• Description: For my love.
• Date: 04/18/2009
• Tags: rose

I can't hold on if the thorns are there,
Scathing my palm like you don't care.

Elegant as you are, I continue to bleed,
Holding on to your every need.

Taking my breath for your very own,
Enjoying yourself while I'm never known.

To you I'm nothing,
just filth in your world.

To me you're everything,
I can't just let go.

So i bare with your thorns,
since you are my rose.

Although you neglect me,
My love only grows.

Comments

[Fantastic Nightmares]

*Sniffles* *Wipes tear* *Raises sign* 10.9/5 *Crosses the numbers out* *Rewrites with red sharpie* 100,000,000/5

[Kari502]

i loved it. ur such a good writer.

[ii Hate You-x]

<3 Lovely Poem biggrin .

[Zira361]

Simply fantastic. I applaud for you, mainly because I can't snap. The second, third, fourth, sixth, and last (seventh) were the best stanzas. The last one was the absolute best though. 5/5