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My Poems and Such
well i was kinda just looking for a place to put up my poems so i could get some opinions on them. theyre a little emo, but dont worry, im not suicidal...
The very 1st one i ever wrote:

"You say you want to kill me
You say you want me to die
Well go ahead, I wont stop you
I wont even try"


please, please, please feel free to comment, but no flamers. i just want some opinions and pointers on my stuff. ill post more as soon as i can.






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Xxhidden_wingsxX
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 06, 2009 @ 02:59am
it's kinda short but i rly like it!!!!! heart


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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 14, 2009 @ 03:20am
cry So grim!!!...what's up with that? Send me a note. I'll tell you stories to cheer you up... twisted


Tell me who you are, I am spellbound
You cannot have this control on me
Everywhere I go, I am spellbound
I will break the spell you put on me

davidl8ly
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Leading The Phalanx
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commentCommented on: Sun Aug 30, 2009 @ 04:46pm
Its.. So... SADDDDD-DAA. lol ninja


commentCommented on: Wed Dec 16, 2009 @ 02:09am
sorry i'v been rood it rilly a cool poem



mariah_is_gay_whoo
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