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Whispers from a White Feather
Hello my readers, I am Snow that Flutters down like Feathers. I am a poet on Gaia Online and Tumblr. I have been writing since 2013. My Tumblr: http://flutterysnowfeathers.tumblr.com My Ko-fi: http://ko-fi.com/snowfeatherswrites
In the Ice
Laying down all sprawled against the cold sheets.
The coolness.
The cleansing touch of this vapor mist.
Melting all of this warmth that I carry in this kind heart of mine.
Gently caressing my cheeks with its cool and minty breath.
My breath making curly cues like smoke from a freshly lit cigarette on the concrete floor.
It is painful...yes...the frozen touch that it gives me...
The chills.
The thrills.
Yet, the pain of this cooling air that surrounds me gives me this strange warmth.
Almost as if strangling me.
The pain kills yet saves me from all these crucial memories.
Everything is clear now.
Freezing in a temperature below zero.
No longer do I need anyone to be my hero.
All that step over my frozen and preserved body.
Looking at the frost and crystals that gleam over my hair and face.
As if to embroider me with its gentle lace.
As long as I am under this block of ice.
There is no need to think of leaving twice.
-Snow that flutters down like feathers

Note to all who read: Feel free to comment on any of these poems, they are appreciated! <3






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xX VENOXiS Xx
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commentCommented on: Sun May 18, 2014 @ 10:17am
it's 05:17 am...


commentCommented on: Sun May 18, 2014 @ 10:19am
My favorite part is the last two lines, it really wraps up the poem nicely. And the similes like the cigarette one is so good! I love this poem! dramallama



xSaKura-kyandiiX
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Phantom of the Icee
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commentCommented on: Sun May 18, 2014 @ 10:19am
So peaceful~ It warms my heart and calms my mind, like a spot of hot tea on a cold winter afternoon.


commentCommented on: Mon May 19, 2014 @ 01:54am
what can there be said diane... other than it feels good.... cept that my captcha says satin and the number 666 O,m,O



Jesse l29l
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