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Poems and Heartstrings
This is a journal for me to share my writing with the gaian world...enjoy and plz if you must criticize I have 3 rules... keep it clean, dont be overly harsh, dont judge ME on just one poem.
Burning Love Inside
We've always had our strife
Of being together in this life
And while problems arise that arent so kind
Im sure that there is hope we can find
You acept me for who I have become
An anoyance to others a friend to some
I breathe in the sorrows you cry
I forgive you if you forgive I
Theres nothing holding us away
Our hearts conect every day
Words spoken across space
Mean as much as they would face to face
I once thought my mind, body, and soul was complete
But I know they will never be until our lips meet
An obstacle this distance nothing more
Love has no boundries...Of this, Im sure
Chaos abound there is nothing to fear
We are so far apart and yet so very near
As much as I hate ..the distance outside
I can feel the love burning on the inside.






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tikitales
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 02:03am
what a beautiful poem...full of depth...thank you for sharing it...


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