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INTRODUCTION:
Hannah heart is at Sams House and are disscusing who should be first to take the test their making for people to see if they are worthy of being in their club. The first to try it was Jordan Simpson a guy known as Simmo. His first task is to climb up on to the highest point of Bayview College and jump onto a small trampoline about the size of a young bear. He succeeds and goes onto the next task. Three days later only two people succeeded they were Simmo and Aydon Price.
PROBLEM:
Aydon , Simmo and Hannah heart went to Sams place. Sam told them about the kingdom of the unknown. They don’t know why it was falling down but they were going to find out. As they get to unknown kingdom they see 2,000,000 people running outside. Sam, Simmo and Hannah heart were having a chat while Aydon went inside the broken building. Sam realises that Aydon went missing and decided to tell the others to find him. Aydon finds a small plate with ingravings in it. The writing was weird and read:
. Next to it was an acient scroll and it read =m, =y=h =r =a =e…….
now the plate read: my ea.
he could read the rest and it said: my name is old and I need a new one please hurry or I will crumble the whole world hhhuurry……………………
SOLUTION:
Aydon found the others and ran for the highest point of the kingdom. On the way they ran into a fiery pit. A giant popped up and attacked without warning. Sam and simmo seemed to glow and they fused by touch. Sam seemed to react to simmo into a water angel/demon which defeated a giant problem.
They ran into many other things but they got to the top. Everyone was arguing what we should call it but I sneakely took it and yelled very loud NEVERLANNNDDDD!
All of us went home and the king came out and granted us eternal life.
THE END
Comments (4 Comments)
- Rawr Mehh Dinosaur - 01/26/2010
- World of the unknown is from kingdom hearts stealer!
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- Commando Axton - 11/11/2009
- Okay, for one, it's choppy, and it seems like a 5 year old wrote it. There's no adjectives, no sentence starters. No basic story line. Just bam, bam, bam. The end. *tch* If you acually wrote a story, and called it that, it would be good.
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- hazuinf - 08/06/2009
- wow. its....wierd. i didnt read it all, but wat i read was pretty damn wierd. confused lol, was ok though. its not bad, its not just not especially good.
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- boombox69 - 05/29/2009
- ok this may be weird but its not all i can do caz i wasnt that bored when i wrote this
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