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ummmmm...hiya
a cut
A CUT
a poison rain drop falls fromt he sky to my cheek for a moment it makes me week but the tone of my shreik makes it frezze a tear drop falls from my eyes all my feelings come alive but only the real tear drop falls along with my body that crys...........when you live people pretend to laugh they pretend to cry but when you die they leave your body to lie lie in the ground to bleed and decay well you know what they make my day with all there hate and with alll the pain makes me feel a lot more lame makes me think about if i am real or am i just fake do i shiver or do i shake one deep cut is alll it take to see me never to wake....a cut is all it takes






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lllll-Drake-llll
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 11, 2007 @ 02:39am
if u wrote that ur great at writing poetry 3nodding


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 11, 2007 @ 11:42am
yes drake i wrote it and thank-you your sweet



kei-kei kitty
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asuna5191
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 17, 2007 @ 04:22am
OMG You should be a writer! That Is really goood!!! 3nodding 4laugh


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 18, 2007 @ 04:47am
whoa! this is amazing!!! i like it a lot. biggrin my fav part "when you live people pretend to laugh they pretend to cry but when you die they leave your body to lie lie in the ground to bleed and decay" yay! lol... pretty deep. smile



Camikila
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Maxcina
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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 21, 2007 @ 02:16am
it brought me to tears.=( crying


commentCommented on: Fri Oct 19, 2007 @ 03:58am
honey i read ur poems i luv heart them all!!
but not as much as i love you!!! heart



Ayame-sama4
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