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Dreamer of Love
Dreamer Of Love

When the night darkens the sky,
I fly to the Land of Dreams.
Where my heart is set free and my mind relaxs.

My dreams was past love and trust.
Photographs and memories of love,
Of my heart beating with joy and warmth.
To my love, one thats moved on.
One that is no more.
The dream reminded me of what I have given away to a world
That didnt want it anymore.
What I had and never will again.

Of his voice,
Of his laughter,
Of his joy,
Of his smile,
Of his love and warmth.

Last night, I became a Dreamer of Love.






User Comments: [2]
Foxless
Community Member





Tue Dec 15, 2009 @ 11:54pm


This is why i sometimes hate dreams...


Peasley
Community Member





Fri Jan 01, 2010 @ 08:30pm


Ah, this is beautiful. Line five really caught my attention.
The last six lines...as always... were a wonderful way to end the poem. Personally, I think you should have wrote another stanza or two about waking up to misery, but that's just me. Keep writing! ^^


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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