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Enjoy this peice of randomness So, time for a new entry because the last one has 50 comments which is far more than I expected for any single poem. sweatdrop Anywhow...this is a peice that is completely random. I found some thing online that described itself as a "song creator" but it was pretty much you write up a short poem one line in at a time in these prompts it sets up and then it gives it back to you and tells you to put it to music lol. However, I liked this. It took me a total of a minute to write it, and I just wrote what came to me. Seemed fitting for...well...nothing really, I was just writing. Enjoy it. Perfect Day In Hell I woke up to the sound of screaming in my ears So I rolled back over and slept another hundred years But Satan, he came looking for his disobediant bride And again I rose with head held up 'cause I got too much damn pride With demons crawling up my back and fire in my hair I have the taste of ash in my mouth but I don't really care And he called to me across the way like I wanted to be here Said "Now come on lovely, it's a perfect day, can't you taste the fear?" On a perfect day in Hell you can feel the hate of Heaven On a perfect day in Hell all is really pleasant On a perfect day in Hell I wear my hair in my face 'Cause on a perfect day in Hell you can feel your soul's missplaced I wasn't meant to be here, I was born with wings upon my back But my eyes were full of fire and my blood was running black I took a cross and stabbed myself and that's an honest fact But once you've sold your soul to Satan there is no turning back PS:: Remember people, there are other poems too. Feel free to read those and leave notes.

Posted by: Rass Fri Aug 19, 2005 @ 09:55am

[b:723929a83e]A First On TV

This is the twentieth century,
you are there, preparing to skin
a human being alive. Your part
will be to remain calm.[/color:723929a83e][/b:723929a83e]

-David Ignatow[/color:723929a83e][/align:723929a83e]

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Commented on: Fri Aug 19, 2005 @ 09:57am


	heart first comment! heart That was brilliant! I can't wait for moreeeeeee

Commented on: Fri Aug 19, 2005 @ 11:38am


	wow, thats great! yur good at poetry! i dont know hoe you do it, i find it a bit challenging, wow, you have talent!

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Commented on: Fri Aug 19, 2005 @ 01:23pm


	I like :3

Commented on: Sat Aug 20, 2005 @ 03:20am


	That was interesting ^ ^ as I was reading, it gradually turned into a song in my head (I guess that was the idea ^ ^" wink Er.. anyway, I thought it was a good read ^ ^

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Commented on: Sat Aug 20, 2005 @ 04:34pm


	heart Very nice Rass. I never knew you were such a poet! surprised Anyways, I thought that poem was very interesting. I think my favorite line of it was "I wasn't meant to be here, I was born with wings upon my back." Sounds sad... =-(

Commented on: Sun Aug 21, 2005 @ 05:36pm


	i thought it was somthing fun to read i liked it

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Commented on: Fri Aug 26, 2005 @ 02:55am


	Claps That was very interesting!^^ heart

Commented on: Sat Aug 27, 2005 @ 02:08pm


	Well, that was interesting. Your poems are great. Keep them coming. heart

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Commented on: Sat Aug 27, 2005 @ 02:52pm


	You're a really good poet ^^

Commented on: Sat Aug 27, 2005 @ 03:12pm


	eek A+

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Commented on: Sat Aug 27, 2005 @ 03:52pm


	Lovely written and it just made me want to huggle your poem!

Commented on: Sat Aug 27, 2005 @ 06:58pm


	o: I like that. :3

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Commented on: Wed Aug 31, 2005 @ 04:29pm


	.:;I like it very much. =o Do you have linkage for the site?;:.

Commented on: Thu Sep 01, 2005 @ 08:34pm


	wow, that's really good. I especially like the last verse. I can't wait to read more heart

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Commented on: Thu Sep 01, 2005 @ 10:43pm


	You need to teach me how you do this

Commented on: Fri Sep 02, 2005 @ 01:18am


	that was an insane poem man, really good!

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Commented on: Fri Sep 02, 2005 @ 01:21am


	Love it. My favorite line was "So I rolled back over and slept another hundred years."

Commented on: Fri Sep 02, 2005 @ 01:36am


	I liked it. Highly interesting. Claps Bravo!

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Commented on: Fri Sep 02, 2005 @ 02:46am


	I liked it. You've got a really good mind for poetry now I'm inspired to write some! Good Job ^^.

Commented on: Fri Sep 02, 2005 @ 03:13pm


	<3 i love the bottem part its ...so ....inspirable ...<3

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Commented on: Sun Sep 04, 2005 @ 11:11am


	creepy.

Commented on: Thu Sep 08, 2005 @ 08:37pm


	I like it... I write, too. But not poems xd

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Commented on: Thu Sep 08, 2005 @ 10:46pm


	heart heart

Commented on: Fri Sep 16, 2005 @ 11:30pm


	Eh it was ok

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Commented on: Fri Sep 16, 2005 @ 11:51pm


	claps Well done Better than mine any ways sweatdrop Alot alot alot better sweatdrop sweatdrop

Commented on: Sat Sep 17, 2005 @ 04:04pm


	wow that is total awesomeness come see mine some time

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Commented on: Sat Sep 17, 2005 @ 04:06pm


	we could like have a poetry pow wow or something. 4laugh

Commented on: Sat Sep 24, 2005 @ 12:03am


	AWESOME!! Loved it! biggrin biggrin heart heart heart

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Commented on: Sat Sep 24, 2005 @ 03:27pm


	OMG, This is such good poetry GOOD JOB, Rass.... 3nodding

Commented on: Fri Oct 14, 2005 @ 12:47pm


	That was SUCH a great poem! I want to read more!

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Commented on: Thu Oct 20, 2005 @ 12:04am


	^^ Still is the best even when read more than 57 times!

Commented on: Thu Oct 27, 2005 @ 11:53am


	its great!

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Commented on: Fri Nov 04, 2005 @ 05:21am


	Wow, that's awesome! Great work, I can practically hear it being sung as I read it. mrgreen

Commented on: Sun Nov 20, 2005 @ 12:22pm


	Wow,thats brilliant mrgreen .It sounds like a song more than a poem,a goth metal or punk band could sing it. 3nodding Edit:I was just reading your other comments and i saw this.It was so long ago.

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Commented on: Thu Dec 29, 2005 @ 02:17am


	It's pretty cool and interesting. You could almost make that into a song. whee But it seems enough people think song as well. XD You aught to enter it into a poetry contest. I'd suggest poetry.com, BUT I think it's off by like a line as far as their contest size limit goes. sweatdrop

Commented on: Thu Dec 29, 2005 @ 02:24am


	eek This is really amazing. Nice imagery, and I'm amazed that you made it rhyme yet not sound too primary. Real good peice of work. looks at other poems heart

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Commented on: Sat Dec 31, 2005 @ 09:14am


	Wow. o_o I really like that. It presents a wonderful image/story. S'funny. xD I write poetry too, and some of them I turn into songs. Maybe ye'll stop by my DA page or something. o= I'm about to update with two new pieces. heart

Commented on: Thu Jan 05, 2006 @ 10:58am


	That was pretty freaking awesome! I loved it. I cannot believe hwo talented you are! This was really wonderful and I truly enjoyed it. Cassandra

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Commented on: Sat Jan 28, 2006 @ 03:08pm


	Personally,i think the other poems are alot better than this one.Its not bad but your capable of much more.

Commented on: Thu May 04, 2006 @ 07:00am


	It was really good. I loved the lines "I wasn't meant to be here, I was born with wings upon my back But my eyes were full of fire and my blood was running black" I can kind of relate to that sweatdrop

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Commented on: Sat Apr 14, 2007 @ 12:38am


	I really like the third stanza. It is very catchy. If you want to read some of my poems just pm me and I'll let you read a few. I really did like this one.

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